Are Keywords Destroying the Flow of Your SEO Copy? by Karon Thackston

Are Keywords Destroying the Flow of Your SEO Copy? by Karon Thackston

by Karon Thackston2004, All Rights Reserved
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With all the shuffling thats been seen in the search engine world within the last year, the issue of obvious optimizing has become a hot button. The current line of thinking is that most engines (especially Google) are on the lookout for sites that purposely make an effort to optimize their pages in order to get high rankings. While this theory has not been proven, I agree that obvious optimization is not a good thing. Not exclusively because of what Google might think, but because of what your site visitors might think.

When a Web site is created with the intent of having it ranked highly, one thing often happens. The focus gets placed solely on the optimization and is taken almost completely away from the visitor. This leaves your site in a dangerous state of unbalance. Lets take a look at some examples.

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New Orleans Web Design
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Our New Orleans Web design firm offers a high level of creativity to businesses located in the general area. Our New Orleans Web design styles are never made from templates. Each New Orleans Web design is a custom creation just for your site.

I cant count how many times Ive visited Web design sites that were targeting local audiences and found copy similar to this example. Forget for a moment that this copy is completely me, us, we, our centered, and let me ask you a question.

If someone asked you what your company did would you say, Web design or New Orleans Web design? Yes, I know the keyphrase is New Orleans Web design, but using that phrase interchangeably with Web design shatters the flow of natural language. Breaking up that phrase will help you retain your appeal to the engines and your site visitors. It will also keep you from appearing to be over optimized.

Youll also want to vary your terms to avoid absolutely bombarding the reader (and the engines) with the same keyphrases. That *may* mean the need for longer copy *if* your target audience is one that would respond well to longer copy.

Try this instead:

Progressive, creative, upbeat. Those are phrases that best describe many online businesses based in New Orleans. Web design for your organization should match your style. Never created from templates, the site designs youll receive will be truly reflective of your corporate personality. Because we work exclusively with companies located in or near New Orleans, Web designs retain that Big Easy feel.

See the difference? By breaking the phrase up, you work with the flow of natural language instead of against it. To your site visitors and the engines, it appears the phrase is just part of a written conversation instead of something that has been purposely (and carelessly) tossed in for the sole benefit of higher rankings.

So, is the flow of your current copy destroyed by keywords? Are you scaring off both the engines and your visitors? One quick check can help you decide. Read your copy out loud. (Or better yet, have someone else read your copy out loud.) Does it sound odd? Does reading it feel forced or stiff? Would the sentences youve written in your copy seem out of place in the course of a verbal conversation with someone? If you answered yes to any or all of these questions, you might better take a closer look at your Web page.


About the Author
Karon is author of How To Increase Keyword Saturation (Without Destroying the Flow of Your Copy). Discover the secrets to creating SEO copy with a perfect balance between keywords and natural language. http://www.copywritingcourse.com/keyword

3 Steps To Better Sales Copywriting by J.L. Reid

3 Steps To Better Sales Copywriting by J.L. Reid

Whether youre wet-behind-the-ears or a seasoned copywriter, your craft will benefit by remembering one thing:

Youre nothing more than a salesperson.

Theres an old saying in the business that, a copywriter is a salesperson sitting in front of a typewriter. True, few of us are using typewriters these days. The principal, however, remains unchanged.

Were in sales. I know this. You know this. We all know this. Yet why does much of the copy out there, especially ads produced by expensive agencies, seem to miss the point?

If all were doing is sales, albeit transmitted through a written or broadcast medium, then wed better know what were doing.

Starting the process

While studying creative writing, I learned this storytelling maxim: every character has a motive for being in a scene. The same is true in a sales situation.

The salespersons motive is simple. He wants to make the sale and get his commission. But what does the potential customer want?

First, what type of customer are they? Are they ready to make an immediate buy? Are they information shopping, looking for a great deal? Are they even looking for our product or service?

Ask Questions, then Shut-up and Listen

When selling to prospective customers ask questions that get them to reveal their needs. Its a mistake to sell the product on the tip of your tongue. Model X might work, but if you listen you might discover that the more expensive Model Z is what the customer really needs.

Once you know why the prospect is there--whether they have an unresolved need, an emotional reason for buying, or theyre just shopping around--tailor your pitch to their specific reason.

Now when you make the pitch, tell how your product benefits the customer, rather than rattling off product features you think he cares about.

When Youre Finished, Close the Door

By this point your spiel should be unforced. You know the customers hot-buttons so everything should be smooth sailing.

After youve explained the last product benefit, you (as the salesperson) are obligated to close the deal. The way you do that is simply to ask, Are you ready to make your decision? or Is this the product youd like to buy?

Hopefully the answer is yes. If not, then you ask, When would you be ready to make your decision? Can I contact you then?

What Does This Have to Do with Copywriting?

Remember, youre nothing more than a salesperson. So you, so while writing copy, you should go through similar steps.

1. Qualify the prospect. How you write your copy, and the ratio of hard selling to information-based soft selling, will change with the medium youre working in. But the first thing your copy should do is state outright what business youre in and what youre selling.

If your pitch is too vague, if its implied, or it depends on prior knowledge for comprehension, then your prospect might never realize he needs what youre selling.

2. Sell Benefits, not Features. Ive heard many sales trainers say, Its not about you, its about them. Thats golden advice. The best way to apply this idea to your copy is by focusing on your products benefits.

A sports cars features might be power steering, fast acceleration, and fuel efficiency. The benefits of that same car to a man a mid-life crisis, however, are the social status and appearance of youth it gives him. Which reason, the benefits or the features, would cause him to buy?

In a face-to-face sales environment its easy to ask for a specific customers needs. When writing sales copy you can create the same rapport by being customer-centered. To do this, write in the second person, or You voice. If your copy repeatedly says your company does this, or your product does that, youre being self-centered. Your prospect wont see himself benefiting from your product.

3. Close the Deal. I cant count how often Ive read a brochure, watched a commercial, or visited a website and had no clue about what I was supposed to do.

Always end your copy with a Call-to-Action.

Tell the customer exactly what you want him to do. This isnt the time to be cute, so be exact. Do you want him to call you? Click a Buy This button? Make a donation? Tell your customer, or else he wont do anything.

When asked what I do I usually say Im a freelance marketing and publicity copywriter. Im might revise the statement to, Im a freelance sales copywriter, because thats what it all comes down to: sales. Whether your copy creates a direct response or creates publicity and general awareness of your company, if you dont sell you might as well not be in business.

About the Author
J.L. Reid is a freelance marketingerfreelance sales copywriter based in Raleigh NC. Visit his website, www.reidwrite.com, to learn more about his services.